| #poem | -
I take no notice of the fact
you want me not to be exact
when judging you.
I will not do
contempt when I condemn your act.
At dVerse today, Gay Reiser Cannon wants us to invent our own form of poetry. My attempt will be the form of the poem above, called "Judging you". I have written a couple of poems in Norwegian like this, but this is the first I write in English. I hereby name the form "Victoria". There should be five lines in the poem. The lines should be iambic. In line 1,2 and 5 there should be four feet. And in line 3 and 4 there should be two feet. The rhyme scheme should be |aabba|. Preferably, I think, it should be a change in line 4. By the line there should be a change of keeping.
[April 18th at 15:19: I have decided to call the form "iamberick".]
[May 6th 2014 16:26: I have changed the name of the form to "blueberick".]
I have put a link to this post on the blog hop of "dVerse" | here |.