Vaccinius

Saturday, 30 August 2014

Nut cracking



If common measure to perform
you can, you should be glad.
Of any form, that is the norm.
Defeating is not bad.

And when you do, think of the man
as form which will be done.
A clever woman do him can.
And done, his right is gone.

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I am, with the help of God, making a collection of poems in the form of common measure. And it is a pleasure to write by that form!

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This poem is published on my site "Common measure" | here |.
I have put a link to this post on the blog hop of "dVerse" | here |.

6 comments:

  1. there is def a sense of accomplishment when you can crack a form
    i am more known for breaking them..ha

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  2. are you inferring to the fall with the last two lines ?

    I always enjoy your writes.

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    1. That is a clever way of seeing it. To authorize is knowing good from evil. Adam was empowered by eating that fruit. And speaking of Eve, to be authorized is a fall from being innocent.

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  3. Indeed form and conforming is one way.. to break them is another.. to write of bliss is one, to understand the fault of humans as important..

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  4. cleverly put & i love the title :)

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  5. I like the way you wrote in form, described the form and had an alternate theme going at the same time. Good Write.

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