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Thursday, 28 August 2014

Reliability

RELIABILITY

It is much better to be quit
than living life by being fit.
The cherry tree will loose its bloom.
Life is most fun when making it.

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Today, Bjรธrn Rudberg very nicely calls for poems in the form of "ruba'i" at d'Verse. I loved writing such a poem! I am familiar with the structure of a quatrain, and it was funny to use this rhyme scheme.

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I have put a link to this post on the blog hop of "dVerse" | here |.

7 comments:

  1. some times it is better to quit and walk away than force yourself to fit...
    the cherry tree line is interesting and jumps out nicely...
    life is def more fun when you find the flow of it...

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  2. your 3rd line is a nice metaphor to emphasize the rest of your poem.

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  3. life is more fun in the living! Good work.

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  4. The blooming cherry tree make a great contrast here..

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  5. i wonder what you were thinking as you added the tree

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  6. I like the use of a tree and connecting with making life. Well done!

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  7. I agree with the last line...nice...

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